Wednesday, November 2, 2011

My Comments

I agree, the holocaust was awful! It wasn’t fair how these people were treated so badly. Though I wonder if Hitler had never existed, what would happen?

Hey Adrian, your story had me intrigued the moment I started reading it. I loved the way you worded everything…I can’t wait to read the rest of your story!

Hey Cesar, your poem was very descriptive. I could almost feel what you were writing. Awesome job!

Your story almost made me want to cry. What inspired you to write this?

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